Thursday, 16 April 2020

My Parrot



Today I Aiden bailey went for a walk with my dad,
Mum, and kora down to a food forest where fruit
Grows . why i went was i wanted to collect
Leaves so i can make a parrot out of leaves.
We felt very very very very very very very cold
Outside because of the wind. We could see trees 
And  all the colored leaves


By Aiden Bailey
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2 comments:

  1. Sarah16 April 2020 at 14:12

    Hi Aiden
    Wow what beautiful coloured leaves, your parrot looks amazing.
    Don't forget to make sure you are using your punctuation correctly, for example no capital letters in the middle of a sentence unless it's the name of something or someone.
    I'm looking forward to reading about more of your adventures :)
    Sarah

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  2. Unknown28 June 2020 at 16:08

    I like your picture Aiden. Well done

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