Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 17 April 2020
my favourite toy
Do any of you have a favourite soft toy?
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Kia Ora Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI like your dog fluffy, I can tell you love him lots and look after him well. My favourite toy when I was a child was my barbie, I loved playing with her. Would you take Fluffy you like the soldiers did with ANZAC Ted in the story?
Miss Hart
miss hart thank for your comment. Yes i would love take Fluffy to the war to remember him
DeleteHi Aiden
ReplyDeleteYour dog Fluffy sounds very cute, it's great that he likes to listen to your reading. I like how you remembered to use a capital 'F' for his name...good job Aiden.
Sarah
thank you for writing back cant wait to see you again.
ReplyDeleteHi Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI did see the picture of Fluffy on Friday but for some reason I can't see it now. I think it's a good idea to have a small fluffy toy because I think Kora would be too big to snuggle with you while you are sleeping! I don't have a soft toy now but Toby has a Tigger that he has had since he was about 2 and now he is 13.
Mrs Hamilton