Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 1 May 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Aiden, what a list of things that you are thankful for. I bet your friends are very thankful to have you as a friend as well. Do you take your dog to the beach when you go to play there?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Aiden,
ReplyDeleteI like your list of things you are thankful for. I think your friends loved seeing you on the hangout this morning. I like that you are experimenting with the colour of the words. Next time think about what colours are easy to read and how many you use.
Have you drawn anything recently?
Miss Hart
Hi Aiden
ReplyDeleteI think the colourful list of things you are thankful for is fantastic. I love the photo of you and Kora, it's cool to see you have such a special bond.
Sarah