W.A.L.t write a limerick In room 2 we have been writing limericks. A limerick is something that has,5 or 7 lines and lines 1 to 3 and 5 rime but 3 and 4 do not rime like the others. So what i mean is 3 and 4 have different riming words, to the others.
Once there was a man named Bob,
Who had a massive gob. He swallowed a log, and then a hog! And that was the end of Bob!
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hi aiden it is nice to see you doing bob the builder.I like how you add massive gob in the story bob the builder and that you add that he swallowed a log.maybe you could that maybe you add a bit more. did you think about how you could add mabey and more joy in to it
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